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colbert wip2 by nillia colbert wip2 by nillia
Go go go
cell shading or no?

I'm adding stars and a couple other planets. Should there be shiny action lines around his head, or earth, or not?
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Dandilion-qeen Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010
i would pull up his left (our right) eyebrow a little more, make it really exaggerated.
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Anu-bisa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it!
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InsolentWhelp Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2010
Afterwards you *must* send this to his show. :D
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silverwolf868 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
Yes for the 'shiny action lines', both around his head and earth; it will give it a nice sense of motion and add to it, especially since his hair kind of blends in with the background. Also, the left side (our left) of the ribbon the medal hangs from looks a tad flat in comparison to the other side, which follows his clavicle. The earth seems a bit flat as well, but that aside, I am worshipping you. I <3 this pic so much, and it's turning out gloriously!
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Kaijuujuju Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
I know this is probably too late but his left arm (the viewer's left) looks really stiff.

(Goodness knows my own anatomy is about as accurate as a throwing a hunk of jello, so take my comment with a grain of salt)
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blueangel326 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
It doesn't necessarily need cell-shading, but there should probably be more dark/black shading. He should possibly be glowing?

BTW, are you gonna throw the moon in there?
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KiwiAngel9 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
Cell shading yes, but make the colors slightly off, to accentuate them a little more. Also, I think definately halo of action lines, on either his head or the world, though probably his head, unless you make the lines yellow, then the earth.
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DarkestElemental616 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Since it looks very DC-comics-eque, I would say no on cel shading. The dark shadows make up for it already.
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cjflutterbye Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
Yes, cell shading
He needs the "All mighty" head glowing aura thing going on.

Very cool!
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dragonrise Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2010
I think cell shading would match the best with the image as it currently is. And if you do action lines, maybe around his head? Dunno, if you do more planets and stars it might end up too busy for action lines.
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