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A Cute Couple-- DRAFT by *nillia:iconnillia:

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Submitted: March 5, 2004
Image Size: 91.7 KB
Resolution: 600×1008
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An unfinished picture for a contest on Gaia. *shrug* I'm putting it up for feedback.
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=MistaBobby:iconMistaBobby: Mar 7, 2004, 10:56:54 PM
Awesome job!!! How cute.


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~ve:iconve: Mar 8, 2004, 10:19:51 AM
Hmm i would love it to be a bit sharper somhow. it seems a bit blurry.
The expressions are really nice and the poses aswell
add a background perhaps ?
Keep working on it and it will end up just fine =)

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~steihl:iconsteihl: Mar 8, 2004, 10:28:28 AM
Nicely done. Great expression and sentiment, nice use of negative space. Might work on cleaning up the males hands.
~ProfLonghair:iconProfLonghair: Mar 8, 2004, 10:30:09 AM
Well, you asked for a brutal critique, but who can brutalize such a cute image? Damn, it's very unfair.

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~rebeccasx:iconrebeccasx: Mar 8, 2004, 9:26:09 PM
This is looking great! Keep up the fab work :clap:

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~prozzaks:iconprozzaks: Jun 8, 2004, 7:23:08 PM
I really like the lips on your characters; they look so real!

I don't like the kind of brushing you used for the cloathing... it doesn't give the right texture.

The outline of the hands is to dark or massive. The hand of the girl is slender yet the outline make it appear to ... heavy.

I hope my comments help.

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*nillia:iconnillia: Jun 8, 2004, 7:31:41 PM
LOL, thanks. I finished the picture a few months ago, though. [link]

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